THE AUTUMN TURN
Autumn.
So vivid.
The air cool and crisp.
As Papa's grapevines dry up and the Oak grows dormant.
Leaves pitted and jaded as the hillside is littered with dates.
Francine darts across the wooden bridge on her old fashioned bicycle--two pumpkins in each side basket. Off to the left--a sidestreet where a grandmother rakes the leaves into piles on the lawn. The dusk begins to settle into ticker particles of blackness, while autos on the main road turn their headlamps on. Handmade candles of tallow, burning smooth inside the windows, just beyond carved pumpkins with scary faces which sit outdoors. A group of people, some wearing caps and all of them in jackets huddling close to an outside grill, roasting marshmallows ad gulping warm cider.
Off to the right--a sidestreet where a grandfather dangles his leash fastened to "Ming"--his Chiuaua, while Grandma's left arm is sashayed through his right. Their misty breath shows up as smoke dissipating into the night air as they pause in the cul-de-sac. Porch lights appear below bedroom windows where silent whispers adorn their interiors, and fireplaces burn with an orange and yellow crackle.
Night.
So vivid.
Air crisp and cool.
In the Autumn turn.
Copyright (c) 2005 by Michael Manning.



13 Comments:
Ahhh... nice. You've hit exactly on why Autumn is my favorite season.
Nice change of pace. I enjoyed it.
You know I love that one. Fantastic imagery.
Very nice :) I've got photo's that goes with those words ;)
hmmm i can imagine now
very, very nice...
*mauhz and hugs* i know, i can SO make an dramatic entrance...lol
great post michael! i am all smiles. i love the fall so...
it all sounds so delicious and wholesome. but that's because you wrote it that way :))
I love how you wrote this, Michael. What a rich image - in so few words. I can definitely learn from your experience. Thanks so much for sharing!
Lisa: Thanks! I try to keep it fresh and unpredicatable.
Janet: So glad you enjoyed!
Bud: An oldie but a favorite of mine. Thanks for your compliment!
Christa: I'll bet you braved some cold temps!
C. jordan: Welcome! and Thanks so much!
Denny: Thanks! I'm enjoying your Butler series too!!
Kerry: Wow! That is an entrance. I have a future BlOG coming about a guy in the recording business I worked with who made BIG entrances and it's funny!
Karma: It takes me mere days to whole monthts to shape something as seemingly simple as this. Thanks!
Carmi: As much as I enjoy your excellent Editorials! Thank you!!
The imagery reminds me when I was a kid and we visited my cousins in Michigan. We'd walk down the street at night and this was exactly the scene! Great job!
P.S. Glad you had a nice Thanksgiving. Hope you got some rest too :)
Mmmmm warm cider by the grill. How lovely!
~wyn
Carolyn: I'm exhausted from broadcasting work that had me up until 5:30 am with studio time reserved for 1 pm. I made it! I also spent time in Royal Oak as a kid!
lady wyntir: Exactly! I just heated some up!! (in the microwave)!
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